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A sudden embodiment of pain, a glimpse of agony.  Then a wash over of numbness, feelings becomes peace.  The pain of living has past and gone away.  What becomes agony, pain, anger, fear soon grows into elation.  As if floating in an ocean of liquified oxygen.  No toll of gravity, no constant wear and pull of your limbs.  No weight, nothing to remind you of the organism you were once before.  Floating, just floating to the ends of the universe.  Euphoria sweeps over in mila seconds.  The best memories you ever had in your entire life, the funniest moments and happiest moments.  Times where you laughed for minutes on revisited, times where you were happy to be yourself.  The greatest orgasm you ever felt, a feeling that goes all across your body.  All of the greatest songs and musical numbers you ears ever heard all play at once.  Songs that you never forgot, songs where you believed god himself was talking to you through. Moments in your life that were so beautiful you felt death was near just to remind you how beautiful it truly was. Tears fill your eyes, so much love and happiness in such a short time.  Then the saddest and darkest memories, a montage of your own life.  Moments in time that you felt death would come sooner then you thought.  Moments where you cried for hours over something small or something that happened.  The moment in your life you were most damaged, mentally and physically.  Then the moments you were most in love, the image of the person you loved more then anyone in your entire life.  The greatest memories you had with that person.  The sun setting with your love as you kiss into the night and live life to its fulliest.  Still floating in the air toward the sun, "Yes, I am content.  I lived a great life, Im ready to move on"!  Your body floats on until the sun dies, constantly floating until what was once you becomes someone else.  Until god himself speaks a single letter in which fills you with infinite knowledge and answers all the questions you ever had.  Death is not the end, but the beginning.  Im not afraid, not anymore....
Something I thought of and somewhat experienced.....
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Aerozopher Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
nice,
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LillyShertigal Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Its beautiful!!! It brought tears to my eyes!
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Shukibaby Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Filmographer
thanks
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AdJiT Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Student Writer
Woah. It's beautiful. A great cadence and I love the idea.

(I'm very sorry if this is picky/ you don't care/ you don't want to know, but,) In the third sentence, you say "The pain of living has past" It should be passed instead of past. It's a little bit nitpicky, but just in case you care, I thought I'd tell you.
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Red-banner Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
This is beautiful. I love the rhythm of it, how it's almost like a list. The ending is dkjflsjf.
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